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February 8th, 2012, 11:43 am

Average Rating: 5.00
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Reply JigokuNeko, February 8th, 2012, 11:55 am

okies, these final updates will loosen a bit coz some idiot overused her drawing hand and it frakking hurts again. in the meantime you can pick up this totally awesome book series by Lisa Shearin i found which has all this comic had and more elves, magic, funny lines...woohoo, i am chomping through it.

re: shh, don't mention hands, this is a pricky subject for me right now...

re: of course it is a test, or Alyn would be a shoddy hero! but he can't *not* go back. he's supposed to be a royal guard, it would be the worst kind of dishonor to go AWOL.

re: damned if he will damned if he don't :p

re: moar tension

re: i was going for creepy doll, i guess i make everyone cute, lol :p

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Reply Sopek, February 8th, 2012, 1:56 pm

He's... not even... in the garden.. Not really. Is it a dream? A state of mind? Not a physical place? I suppose it is. Cause Alyn is sitting on the ground with his head on a rock.

But yeah... Nice work. Real suspenseful.

Reply IXsage, February 8th, 2012, 3:47 pm

Okay, time for a very naive - or should I rather say - **trolling** comment: xD

"Why is Nirin so afraid? It looks like Alyn is just taking a nap and having a nightmare... . This happens to all of us from time to time. He's probably still fretting about the fact that he can't live together with Nirin and that he couldn't save her from the pirates and so on. So in his dream his guilt manifested as his own twisted evil version of "the Garden of Hearts" complete with "an evil witch", various "tests", where he proves himself worthy of Nirin and so on.

The fact that he's sleeping on a rock clearly shows that he hasn't arrived at the Garden just yet. He will probably wake up soon on his own, Nirin will embrace him, tell him that he had a bad dream and that he shouldn't feel guilty about not being able to help her and then he would cry on her shoulder, because he would be happy to see her again (and in good health) and they would live happily ever after ... The END" ... ! XD

Anyway, don't overwork yourself. Making this comic is supposed to be fun and not hard labor.

Reply Keliose, February 8th, 2012, 5:02 pm

Awwwww....!!!! He's sleeping ^^ so cute! And he has short hair again ^^

Take care of your precious hand ;)

IXsage, I see it differently. The fact he's sleeping doesn't mean he is not in the garden. I'm guessing, not many knows how it looks like anyway. It may be just some strong spell that put people/elves into deap dream, where evil witch put them on trial. But it doesn't mean the which and the garden doesn't exist.
Personaly I like the idea. It is and it isn't real at the same time. World of dreams can be realy messy. Sometimes you're not sure what is real and what is just a dream. In fact this, what we call "reality", could be dream after all.
And about Nirin. She might know that Garden of Hearts is in a "dreamland". The elves from the village could have told her.

(sorry for my english :P)

Reply IXsage, February 9th, 2012, 2:09 am

@Keliose: Yes, I see it exactly as you do. As I indicated in my comment I wasn't really serious when I wrote it. I just wanted to troll a little bit and annoy some people in the process. That's what trolling is about. ^_^

(as about your English: There's nothing to be sorry about. My English isn't that good either. But as long as people understand each other everything is fine. xD )

Reply Keliose, February 9th, 2012, 11:53 am

@IXsage: Just be careful not to annoy JigokuNeko too much xD Also, it was fun to take up the discusion with you ;)

As for english issue. True, it's fine as long as it's understandable for people... Although now I see I should pay more attention "which witch is which" XD or... "which witch is witch" should I say... :D

Reply yummy, February 17th, 2012, 3:07 pm

dramaaaa! in the comic AND in the comments lol

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